Need some feedback!!

[Powell]

I just started making videos again for my youtube and I just recently finished one called "Improve Your Game: Team Fortress 2 Sniper" and uploaded it. It's been a while since I made videos, so I was just wondering if you guys could give me some feedback and criticism about what I could improve on or what you liked. I tried to keep this video pretty simple, since it's very similar to a guide or a "tips and tricks" video. Any help would be appreciated, thanks!

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[Gearhart 1st MRB]

very informative. I dont play the game but i feel like i can be very #1337 with your guide.